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Must... fight... the urge to bump the story up!
Negrospiritual I really liked how you introduced the whole grandfather thing, that was good. Perriford-nice touch! I look forward to reading what u come up with next!

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The Lord is on my side;I will not fear:what can man do unto me?
(Psalms 118:6)


If God brings you to it - He will bring you through it.

*searching for Mr. Solomon's snifter*

Pages ago i had sneaked in that Shani's baby was born with cocaine in his system since the story seemed to suggest that shani occasionally snorted cocaine and had asked her brother Walter to cop some for her. So I was thinking along the lines that Shani had a child services worker to insure she was staying clean and properly taking care of lil Perry. This is how they avoided lil Perry going into foster care.

I like the tension of Shani going to pick up the new baby and bumping into her case worker - who might have been notified by Nurse Osabo...

MissPrettyGirl - You Go Girl! you got me all shook up! Wink Eek

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